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The charts below show the number of marriages and divorces in the USA from 1930 to 2010.

The charts below show the number of marriages and divorces in the USA from 1930 to 2010.
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The two charts show the
number
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 of
marriages
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 and
divorces
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 in the United States from 1930 to 2010. From the first chart, it is notable that the
number
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 of
marriages
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 increased significantly at the beginning of the period from 1.3
million
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 in 1930 to 2.4
million
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 in 1950.
However
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, the total
number
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 of
marriages
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 constantly fell from 1.8
million
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 in 1960 to approximately 1.5
million
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 in 1980. Interestingly, the
number
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 of
marriages
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 rose abruptly between 1990 and 2010. These figures were about 2
million
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 and over 3.5
million
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, respectively.
Furthermore
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, the
number
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 of
divorces
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 was less than the
number
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 of
marriages
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 at the beginning of the period. The figure was less than 2000.
In contrast
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, the figure experienced a significant increase by 1960 ( 600,000),
then
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 it dropped by 1980 (230,000). It is
also
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 noteworthy that after 1990, the
number
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 of
divorces
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 in the USA skyrocketed from 430,000 in 1990 to approximately 1,200,000 in 2010.
Overall
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,
while
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 the
number
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 of
marriages
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 was higher than the
number
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 of
divorces
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 in the early 1990s, the
number
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 of both
marriages
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 and
divorces
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 surged after the 2000s.

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