The pie cahrts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to The US between 1988 and 2000
The table
illustrate
the amount of money spent on Change the verb form
illustrates
fish
in dollars, while
pie
charts compare three countries in terms of imported to the United States Correct article usage
the pie
fish
in 1988, 1992, and 2000.
Overall
, it can be observed that the income from fish
increased significantly. Moreover
, China
contributed the least to imported fish
, while
other countries made the largest proportion.
To start with, in 1988 nations received from sales about 6.57 billion. Around 60% of this
value was made up by Canada, whereas
China
and others accounted only for 13% and 27% rsepectively
. Correct your spelling
respectively
However
, by 1992, the percentage of Canada`s earnings had a 26% decrease, and the value of sourced fish
by China
and other nations increased to 20% and 46% of fish
in the same order, which overall
made nearly 8.52 billion.
It is noticeable that in 2000 the number of
total income rose to 10.72 billion. Correct quantifier usage
apply
According to
the pie chart of this
year, it is seen that the proportion of others remained the highest (42%). While
Canada and China
had a similar rate, about 30%.Submitted by chtpstmy42 on
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