The diagram below shows the process of photosynthesis

The diagram below shows the process of photosynthesis
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The chart illustrates how plants produce oxygen throughout the photosynthesis stage.
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, the process contains 5 main stages absorbing the carbon, going through some chemical reactions for creating oxygen.
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, after finishing all these steps, the process begins again. The initial phase focuses on CO2 entering the leaf through the stomate (an opening in the leaf’s epidermis and cuticle) thanks to the light from the sun. After that, the combination of CO2,
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, and sunlight creates sugar depend on the sunlight. Not only that, the outlook of plants looks green by the green wave lengthed from the sun to absorb the chlorophyll. Moving onto the production of photosynthesis, the
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and oxygen
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get out of the leaf through the stomata,
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loss can be fulfilled by
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transported by the root. Returning to the sugar which is excess, can be stored in the roots as a starch (food).

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