The graph below shows the percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features in Vietnam in the year 2005, 2008, 2010.

The graph below shows the percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features in Vietnam in the year 2005, 2008, 2010.
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The table depicts data on different mobile features that were used by their owners in Vietnam in the year 2005, 2008, and 2010.
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, a rising trend can be seen among services during those years. Notably, making calls was one feature that was used most frequently, sections like taking photos and sending,
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and receiving
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messages followed after. Meanwhile, playing music was used the least.
To begin
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with, in both 2006 and 2008, the percentage of calls that were made reached 100,
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in 2010 it reduced by 1%.
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this
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, the share of
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like taking photos increased each year by 5%, attaining 76 in 2010.
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,
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over time
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sending and receiving messages experienced a slight growth from 73 to 79.
On the other hand
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, the least performed feature was playing music, starting at 12 and reaching 26 by 2010. It is important to notice that in 2006, in sections like
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the internet and
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videos
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videos,
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there
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not any information.
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