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The graph below shows the amount of tea and tea imported by four countries in tonnes .summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the amount of tea and tea imported by four countries in tonnes .summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant
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The given bar chart compares data on the amount of beverages brought in by the UK,
Canada
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, Germany, and the USA.
Overall
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, as the diagram reveals, any information about
tea
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 that was imported by the UK is picked at high tones,
whereas
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 compared to
coffee
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, there was a dramatic decrease in the volume of its trade. Regarding
Canada
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, beverages were imported much less than in other countries.
This
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 is
in contrast
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 to
Canada
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.
Coffee
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 was imported more than
tea
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 with approximately 40,000
tonnes
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. In terms of
tea
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, it was 20,000
tonnes
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 that were imported
in
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into
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Canada
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. As for the UK,
coffee
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 was imported less than
tea
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, and it was 20,000
tonnes
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.
Subsequently
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,
tea
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 was imported at a significantly higher rate, at 160,000
tonnes
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. The USA imported
tea
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 and
coffee
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 with about 40,000
tonnes
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 and above 100,000
tonnes
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, respectively. The main drinks of Germany had identical quantities, which were nearly 42,000
tonnes
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, tea, coffee, tonnes with synonyms.
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