The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
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The given line graph illustrates the
amount
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of overseas travellers to three unsimilar zones which are namely the coast, the mountains and the lakes in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
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, it can be seen clearly that the coast and the lakes showed an upward trend with up and down
while
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the mountains had a slight rise over the 20-year period. The units are measured as a
thousand
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.
In1987
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In in1987
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, the number of the coast which was the highest figure has a
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steady
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fell from 40 to roughly 35
thousand
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until 1992 and
then
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it had a dramatic increase over the next 15-year period.
At the end
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of the period, the amount reached the peak point
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of
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by
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of
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almost 75
thousand
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. The amount of
the
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apply
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lakes represented
by
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10
thousand
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and it continued to surge between 1987 and 1997. Afterwards, there was considerable growth until 2002 by 74
thousand
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and followed by it showed a gradual decrease in the
last
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5 years to 50
thousand
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.
According to
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the graph, the number of
passenger
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passengers
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in the mountains had a slight rise over the 20-year span which started from 20
thousand
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to approximately 37
thousand
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.
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, there was a levelled off between 1997 and 2002.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • number of
  • areas
  • European country
  • between
  • 1987 and 2000
  • graph
  • introduce
  • overview
  • trends
  • describe
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • summarize
  • main findings
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