The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of people who visited overseas to three different areas in a Europe country between 1987 and 2007.
Use synonyms
Overall
, It can be seen that the coast has the most Linking Words
visitors
at the beginning and over the period. The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
to the lakes has fluctuated, and the mountains have been stable.
The Use synonyms
number
of foreigners who visited the coast began at 40 Use synonyms
thousand
in 1987, and declined to 35 Use synonyms
thousand
in 1992, Use synonyms
then
rose significantly to approximately 75 Linking Words
thousand
Use synonyms
visitors
in 2007. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the mountain had Linking Words
visitors
of 20 Use synonyms
thousand
in 1997, and increased slightly to 35 Use synonyms
thousand
in 2007.
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In addition
, the Linking Words
number
of people who visited the lakes was 10 Use synonyms
thousand
in the beginning. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
increased dramatically and hit a peak at around 74 Use synonyms
thousand
of Use synonyms
visitors
in 2002, Use synonyms
then
decreased to 50 Linking Words
thousand
in 2007.Use synonyms
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