The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of people who visited overseas to three different areas in a Europe country between 1987 and 2007.
Overall
, It can be seen that the coast has the most visitors
at the beginning and over the period. The number
of visitors
to the lakes has fluctuated, and the mountains have been stable.
The number
of foreigners who visited the coast began at 40 thousand
in 1987, and declined to 35 thousand
in 1992, then
rose significantly to approximately 75 thousand
visitors
in 2007. Furthermore
, the mountain had visitors
of 20 thousand
in 1997, and increased slightly to 35 thousand
in 2007.
In addition
, the number
of people who visited the lakes was 10 thousand
in the beginning. Moreover
, the number
of visitors
increased dramatically and hit a peak at around 74 thousand
of visitors
in 2002, then
decreased to 50 thousand
in 2007.Submitted by napatnp18065322 on
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