The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
the graph shows the
number
of international tourists to three different European areas including the coast, the mountain as well as
the lakes from 1987 to 2007.
to begin
with, in general, it is noticeable that the number
of overseas visitors
in all three areas has increased. although
the number
of lake
visitors
went up rapidly until 2002 and then
decreased sharply in 2007, but the sum of lake
visitors
has been increasing compared to 1987.
in detail, at the beginning of the year in
Change preposition
apply
1987
the Add a comma
1987,
number
of lake
visitors
was the least, it is only around 10.000 people
compared to 20.000 people
who visited the mountains in 1987 and 40.000 people
who visited the coast in the same year. the tourists of to the mountains has
risen Change the verb form
have
up
slightly and constantly for the past 20 years and Change preposition
apply
Wrong verb form
reached
reach
more than 30.000 Wrong verb form
reached
people
. unlike the mountain tourist, the visitor or the cost has decrease from 1987 to 1992, begin with 40.000 people
and drop to 35.000 people
. but after that it remained increased until 2007, reaching 75.000 people
. On the other hand
, the amount of people
who visited the European Lake
went up rapidly from 10.000 tourists in 1987 and reached 75.000 people
in 2002, but then
it dropped to 50.000 people
in 2007.
overall
, it is clear that
the visitors
of to the coasts was the highest in 2007 and the number
of mountain visitors
in the lowest in the same yearSubmitted by wiworose on
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