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The charts below show the number of working hours per week, in industrial sector, in four European countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.

The charts below show the number of working hours per week, in industrial sector, in four European countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.
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The data derived from
two
 charts depicts the number of working
hours
 per week in
industrial
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the industrial
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 sector in European countries like
France
 and
Denmark
 in 2002.
Overall
, in
France
 the percentage of workers fluctuated in working
hours
,
meanwhile
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Denmark
 experienced a stagnant trend with the exception of
two
 categories.
Nevertheless
, both countries attained the highest percentages of workers in
two
 common sectors of working
hours
. On the one hand, in 2002,
France
 reached 50% of workers who spent 31-35 working
hours
 per week, following a decrease to approximately 35
percent
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 in the next group with longer
hours
 of labour. Meanwhile,
Denmark
 had the highest percentage of 50 in
this
 sector of 26-40 working
hours
,
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 and a lower rate of just above 20 in the previous group.
According to
 the
two
 charts, it can be seen that other categories of
hours
 in performance mildly fluctuated only hitting 20% top, in
France
.
Likewise
, in
Denmark
, other sectors of working
hours
has
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 been stagnant; remaining at the same level of 10%.
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