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The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.

The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.
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the chart
illustrated
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 the number of
airport
passangers
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passengers
 per year in three different
airport
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airports
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 in New York City from 1995 to 2000.
to begin
 with, in
general
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general,
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 it can be seen that the
visitors
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number of visitors
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 in all three airports has
been
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increased during the period.
Additionally
,
while
 the
amount
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number
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 of
people
 in LaGuardia
airport
 and Newark
airport
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Airport
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 consistently
risen up
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rose
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 from the beginning to the end of
period
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the period
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, the visitor of John F Kennedy
airport
have
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has
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 been fluctuating for the
last
 six years. in detail, LaGuardia
airport
have
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had
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 the most passengers
is
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in
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 the beginning year which
is
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reached 35
millions
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million
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people
 and consistently
inceased
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increased
 even in
slightly
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number
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numbers
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 until 1999 to 50
millions
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million
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people
then
 rocketed to 70
millions
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million
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 visitors in 2000.
otherwise
, the amount of
people
 who visited Newark
airport
 in 1995
is
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was
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 the
least
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lowest
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, only 15
millions
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million
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people
 but it significantly
jump
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jumped
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 to 40
millions
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million
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passangers
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passengers
 in 1997 and remained stable until 2000. unlike the others, the
people
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number of people
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 who visited John F Kennedy
Airport
was jump
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was jumped
was jumping
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 up from 25
millions
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million
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 to 45
millions
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million
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 in the first three years
,
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 but
then
 dropped to 35
millions
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million
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people
 in 1998 and 30
millions
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million
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people
 in 1999. thankfully after
that
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 it climbed to
appoximately
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approximately
 45 million
passenger
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passengers
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.
overall
,
in
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at
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 the end of period the LaGuardia
airport
's passengers
is
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were
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 almost twice more compared
to
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as
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 the
visitor
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visitors
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of
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apply
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John F Kenedy and Neward
airport
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Vocabulary: Replace the words airport, people, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "jump" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • highest number
  • steady increase
  • largest growth
  • dramatic
  • slowest growth
  • slight decrease
  • gradual increase
  • period
  • travelers
  • major airports
  • followed by
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