The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.
the chart
illustrated
the number of Wrong verb form
illustrates
airport
passangers
per year in three different Correct your spelling
passengers
airport
in New York City from 1995 to 2000.
Change to a plural noun
airports
to begin
with, in general
it can be seen that the Add a comma
general,
visitors
in all three airports has Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
been
increased during the period. Unnecessary verb
apply
Additionally
, while
the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
people
in LaGuardia airport
and Newark airport
consistently Capitalize word
Airport
risen up
from the beginning to the end of Wrong verb form
rose
period
, the visitor of John F Kennedy Add an article
the period
airport
have
been fluctuating for the Change the verb form
has
last
six years.
in detail, LaGuardia airport
have
the most passengers Wrong verb form
had
is
the beginning year which Correct your spelling
in
is
reached 35 Unnecessary verb
apply
millions
Change to singular
million
people
and consistently inceased
even in Correct your spelling
increased
slightly
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slight
number
until 1999 to 50 Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
millions
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million
people
then
rocketed to 70 millions
visitors in 2000. Change to singular
million
otherwise
, the amount of people
who visited Newark airport
in 1995 is
the Wrong verb form
was
least
, only 15 Correct word choice
lowest
millions
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million
people
but it significantly jump
to 40 Wrong verb form
jumped
millions
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million
passangers
in 1997 and remained stable until 2000. unlike the others, the Correct your spelling
passengers
people
who visited John F Kennedy Correct quantifier usage
number of people
Airport
was jump
up from 25 Change the verb form
was jumped
was jumping
millions
to 45 Change to singular
million
millions
in the first three yearsChange to singular
million
,
but Remove the comma
apply
then
dropped to 35 millions
Change to singular
million
people
in 1998 and 30 millions
Change to singular
million
people
in 1999. thankfully after that
it climbed to Add a comma
that,
appoximately
45 million Correct your spelling
approximately
passenger
.
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passengers
overall
, in
the end of period the LaGuardia Change the preposition
at
airport
's passengers is
almost twice more compared Wrong verb form
were
to
the Change preposition
as
visitor
Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
of
John F Kenedy and Neward Change preposition
apply
airport
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Vocabulary: Replace the words airport, people, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "jump" was used 2 times.
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