Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.
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The presented map shows the changes that Chorleywood
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experienced
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the years 1886 and 1994 when its population steadily increased.
It is clear that
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from 1868
to 1883, the
village
consisted of two main roads connecting the south to the north and east to the west. Right in the
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of the interjection of the two mentioned roads, There was Chorleywood Park and golf
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, in
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left of which a station was built in 1883-1922.
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, in 1909 a railway was built from the west of the
village
to its east crossing the main road. As time goes on and the
village
becomes more crowded, a motorway gets constructed in 1970,
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to the main road and crossing the railway. In the years 1992 and 1970, construction activity had been focused on areas around the southern section of the station.
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, from 19970 to 1994, all parts of the
village
except the western section,
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construction.
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Overall
, Chorleywood has experienced several changes regarding its population and general construction over the years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Steadily
  • Pivotal events
  • Significant change
  • Transportation links
  • Commuter village
  • Residential areas
  • Commercial areas
  • Public facilities
  • Infrastructure
  • Environmental impact
  • Community life
  • Conservation efforts
  • Maintaining character
  • Vicinity
  • Unique aspects
  • Common challenges
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