The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two
map
provided information how road access to Change to a plural noun
maps
city
hospital
between 2007 and 2010 .
Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
Overall
, the deptch compared city
hospital in the year 2007 and a Correct article usage
a city
city
hospital in 2010.
First of all, there was no change in the north maps while
there was a significant change in the south maps which have two Correct word choice
but
area
in Change to a plural noun
areas
city
hospital 2010 that there a bus station Correct article usage
the city
in
the right-hand side Change preposition
on
also
there opposite this
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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