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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two
map
Change to a plural noun
maps
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 provided information how road access to
city
Use synonyms
hospital
Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
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 between 2007 and 2010 .
Overall
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 , the deptch compared
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city
Correct article usage
a city
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 hospital in the year 2007 and a
city
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 hospital in 2010. First of all, there was no change in the north maps
Linking Words
while
Correct word choice
but
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 there was a significant change in the south maps which have two
area
Change to a plural noun
areas
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 in
Use synonyms
city
Correct article usage
the city
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 hospital 2010 that there a bus station
in
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on
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 the right-hand side
also
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 there opposite
this
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 side

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • improvements
  • facilitate
  • congestion
  • junctions
  • streamline
  • traffic flow
  • reduce congestion
  • public transport
  • bus station
  • efficiency
  • accessibility
  • parking facilities
  • car park
  • designated
  • alleviate
  • issues
  • adequate space
  • enhancements
  • overall accessibility
  • traffic management
  • convenience
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