The graph shows population variation in three wildlife species from 2011 to 2016 in North America and its coastal areas. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows population variation in three wildlife species from 2011 to 2016 in North America and its coastal areas. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of 3 different animals in North America and its coastal areas in a 5-year period, from 2011 to 2016.
Overall
, it can be seen that
while
the
number
of bears in the USA increased over
this
time, the
number
of dolphins declined dramatically.
Also
, the whale
population
remained the same during
this
period. On the one hand, in 2011 the
number
of bears was at the lowest in comparison to two other species with nearly zero.
However
, in the next three years, their
population
experienced a gradual rise and reached 140 thousand species approximately. From 2015 to 2016,
this
trend was seen a 40% growth and it reached its peak which was the highest
number
of wild animals among other animals.
On the other hand
,
while
the dolphin
population
in 2011 was the highest amount with 150 thousand, it decreased dramatically near to zero in 2014 which was the lowest in comparison to others.
Furthermore
, after 2014 dolphin numbers dropped gradually until 2016 when it closed to extinction. During
this
period the
number
of Whales experienced a fluctuating movement between 50000 to 100000 and in 2016
this
number
leveled off to where its
population
started and reached about 70 thousand in total.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population variation
  • wildlife species
  • coastal areas
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • stable
  • year-by-year analysis
  • significant changes
  • species-wise comparison
  • influence
  • climate change
  • human activities
  • conservation efforts
  • natural predation
  • inland areas
  • population trends
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