You are studying at a college which has very limited sports and leisure facilities for students. Write a letter to the principal. In your letter: -Outline the situation -Propose ways to improve this situation -Request a meeting to discuss this

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Dear Sir or Madam, The reason why I am addressing you is

that

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apply

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to let you know

lack

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the lack

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of variety in

sports

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for students at your college. If you

are bring

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are bringing

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sports

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and leisure

facilities

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, it will be nice. I suggest that you have to plan a meeting to discuss

this

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problem

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. Primarily, I am Lucy Anderson and studying at your college as a student.

This

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serious

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a serious

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problem

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for students. Because

sports

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and leisure

facilities

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are very lacking

for

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this

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reason there are many sufficient spaces and outdated

infrestructures

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infrastructures

infrastructure

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physical activities

organizes

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are

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very rare. I have a lot of useful offers including building new

facilities

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, upgrading existing equipment or arranging partnerships with local

sports

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centers

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centres

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. In my

view

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view,

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the best decision will be building new

facilities

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because

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apply

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it has more convenience and

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is adventageous

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adventageous

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advantageous

advantages

. I think if you

are organize

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a meeting about

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problem

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with

staff

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the staff

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, it will be a positive solution. The best

potential

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apply

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time will be

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apply

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next Monday

8:30

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at 8,30

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o'clock. I want to express

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my sincerely

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sincerely

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this

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formal meeting. As far as I know your staff

in other words

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colleagues are talented and professional teachers. I believe that

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problem

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will be solved after the formal meeting. Looking forward to your positive response Yours faithfully, Lucy Anderson

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Grammar and Syntax

Review punctuation and sentence structure for clarity. Some sentences are fragmented or run-on, which affects readability.

Content Development

Elaborate on how you expect the proposed facilities will benefit students. Provide concrete examples or anticipated outcomes.

Task Achievement

You addressed the current issues and proposed several viable solutions, showcasing critical thinking and problem-solving skills.

Suitable Writing Tone

The letter maintains a respectful and formal tone appropriate for addressing a principal.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

214 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

outdated infrastructure
insufficient space
limited equipment
diversified physical activities
upgrade existing equipment
arranging partnerships
built new facilities
introducing more diversified physical activities
formal meeting
potential times and dates
express your willingness
assist in planning
emphasize the benefits

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You are studying at a college which has very limited sports and leisure facilities for students. Write a letter to the principal. In your letter: -Outline the situation -Propose ways to improve this situation -Request a meeting to discuss this

The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

Topic 2: These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.