You are studying at a college which has very limited sports and leisure facilities for students. Write a letter to the principal. In your letter: -Outline the situation -Propose ways to improve this situation -Request a meeting to discuss this
Dear Sir or Madam,
The reason why I am addressing you is
that
to let you know Correct determiner usage
apply
lack
of variety in Correct article usage
the lack
sports
for students at your college. If you Use synonyms
are bring
more Change the verb form
are bringing
sports
and leisure Use synonyms
facilities
, it will be nice. I suggest that you have to plan a meeting to discuss Use synonyms
this
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problem
.
Primarily, I am Lucy Anderson and studying at your college as a student. Use synonyms
This
is Linking Words
serious
Add an article
a serious
problem
for students. Because Use synonyms
sports
and leisure Use synonyms
facilities
are very lacking Use synonyms
for
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this
reason there are many sufficient spaces and outdated Linking Words
infrestructures
. Correct your spelling
infrastructures
infrastructure
Therefore
physical activities Linking Words
organizes
very rare.
I have a lot of useful offers including building new Verb problem
are
facilities
, upgrading existing equipment or arranging partnerships with local Use synonyms
sports
Use synonyms
centers
. In my Change the spelling
centres
view
the best decision will be building new Add a comma
view,
facilities
because Use synonyms
of
it has more convenience and Change preposition
apply
Add a missing verb
is adventageous
adventageous
.
I think if you Correct your spelling
advantageous
advantages
are organize
a meeting about Change the verb form
are organizing
this
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problem
with Use synonyms
staff
, it will be a positive solution. The best Correct article usage
the staff
potential
time will be Correct word choice
apply
on
next Monday Change preposition
apply
8:30
o'clock. I want to express Change preposition
at 8,30
Correct pronoun usage
my sincerely
sincerely
to Change the word
sincere
this
formal meeting. As far as I know your staff Linking Words
in other words
colleagues are talented and professional teachers. I believe that Linking Words
this
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problem
will be solved after the formal meeting.
Looking forward to your positive response
Yours faithfully,
Lucy AndersonUse synonyms
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Grammar and Syntax
Review punctuation and sentence structure for clarity. Some sentences are fragmented or run-on, which affects readability.
Content Development
Elaborate on how you expect the proposed facilities will benefit students. Provide concrete examples or anticipated outcomes.
Task Achievement
You addressed the current issues and proposed several viable solutions, showcasing critical thinking and problem-solving skills.
Suitable Writing Tone
The letter maintains a respectful and formal tone appropriate for addressing a principal.