You are having a graduation party next Saturday night. You have invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening, which may continue into late into the night. Write a letter to your elderly neighbour. In your letter:  explain what will be happening  offer your apologies in advance  invite her to join the celebration

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Dear Mr. Taylor I am writing

this

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letter to inform you about

the

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apply

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week

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week's

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graduation

party

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being

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hosted and organised by me. The

party

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is going to continue till late

eveining

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evening

around 11.30 pm

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night. There will be

barbecue

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a barbecue

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party

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and food is going to

served

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be served

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to all the

guest

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guests

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.All

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the guest

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guest

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are my

class mates

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classmates

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However

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, I am apologising in advance for any inconvenience it will cause

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apply

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you. I understand you and your family are early sleepers. I will make sure the noise level from

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party

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the party

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will remain low throughout the

party

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Also

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smoke from barbecue will not disturb you. I

will

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would

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be very happy if you could join us for

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party

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a party

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and barbecue. it will be nice to see you dancing

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pop songs. It will be

memorable

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moment for me if you attend the

party

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. Hope to see you in

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party

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the party

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. It will be great to see you. Yours sincerely, Jim Marsh

yash334Thu May 23 2024

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task achievement

Consider elaborating a bit more on the details of the party to complete the context. This would help to improve the clarity of your task response.

coherence cohesion

Try to review the organization of your text to make it smoother. Each paragraph should have a clear central idea, and they should naturally flow from one to the next.

task achievement

Your invitation is considerate and polite, showing respect for your neighbour's potential concerns about noise and smoke.

coherence cohesion

Your letter is well-structured with logical paragraphs and a good flow, making it easy to follow.

3
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

157 words

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