The pie charts show the reasons for immigrants to a European country in 2009 and reasons for immigrants from a European country in 2009.
The pie chart illustrates the main purposes for
newcomers
immigration from European territory in 2009, which is divided into several segments, each representing various targets for immigration.
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newcomers'
newcomer's
Overall
, it is clear that
the largest proportion of immigrants arrived and departed in pursuit of occupation. Moreover
, the figure of no justification and other minor causes fell over time.
As the chart indicates, the greatest reason for immigration to Europe
was family reunification, which represented 25% of migrants. In contrast
, this
figure was 15% for citizens who left the
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Europe
.15% of settlers came to Europe
to engage in academic studies, while
a similar proportion immigrated to search for a new profession.Meanwhile, the category of aliens attended with no concrete purposes at 15%, and the smallest percentage was of other motives, at 7%.The
huge quantity of individuals arrived to pursue various careers, which Correct article usage
A
is
reached a peak at 23%. Unnecessary verb
apply
This
was comparable to the percentage of citizens who left their country to meet relatives. which represented 15% each .The main reason for leaving Europe
was to seek diverse employment, accounting for 38% The smallest proportion was with no explanation with 4% and 7% for education, respectively. The figure for alternative reasons were
23% and just 13% Correct subject-verb agreement
was
to look
for occupation.Change the verb form
looked
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