The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year.

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The given bar chart provides information on: transport preferences among young people in countries ( The UK, United

States

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France

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, and Italy ) in years.

Overall

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, there was an upward trend in cars

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there was a downward trend in motorcycles.

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the bar graph, there was an increase in using both cars and bicycles in the UK.

Then

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, the motorcycle was the lowest proportion in

France

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, Italy and the UK. The second highest percentages of cars were

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United

States

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and Italy but

France

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had a

little

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decrease reaching 40 . The United

States

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had a great proportion of using motorcycles reaching 30.

Similarly

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, bicycles had a decreased

dramatically

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numbers in all countries except

France

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states

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apply

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reaching (30 , 10, and 11 ) respectively.

In contrast

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, in

France

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was

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there was

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lept

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large

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number of young people by bicycle .

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

140 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

bar chart
transport preferences
young people
countries
specific year
most popular
mode of transport
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public transport
cycling
walking
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The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year.

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