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The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005
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The table provides information about the differences between
people
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 who travelled to various countries from 1990 to 2005 .It is clear from the graph that, the total
number
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 of
people
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 who travel aboard reached the highest in 2005. In comparison ,the
number
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 of
people
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 who travel to other countries became the lowest in 1990.
According to
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 what is shown, in 1990 the
number
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 of visitors in Europe climbed to 280
while
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people
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 who travelled to the Middle East was 9.8 only. In 1995 the
number
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 of travelers rose to 390 in Europe.
However
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 , the Middle East and Africa had the lowest
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 of
travelers
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at 20 and 11 in the same order.In 2005 there was a slight difference in
number
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 of visitors in America and Asia .
On the other hand
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, the Europe region had the largest
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 of travellers during that time but the Middle East and Africa witnessed a minimum
number
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 of travellers.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
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