Topic: Some people believe online reading material should be used for a child to learn to read whereas others believe only printed materials should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Many people argue that individuals utilize online reading resources for children to get
a knowledge
Remove the article
knowledge
a piece of knowledge
show examples
and other
community
Fix the agreement mistake
communities
show examples
prefer the soft copy material for learning. I agree
with
Change preposition
that
show examples
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
toched
Correct your spelling
torched
materials
Use synonyms
are used in various
aspect
Fix the agreement mistake
aspects
show examples
of life . And facts related to my view will be discussed.
Body paragraph 1
To begin
Linking Words
with a primer reason,
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
show examples
printed
materials
Use synonyms
are easy to remember. Many younger
does
Verb problem
people use
show examples
different language skills via
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
printed paper. Can memorise facts and information which are in books as an example rather than online sources.
Conclusion
By way of conclusion,
after
Linking Words
this
Linking Words
essay has manifested the
a fore mentioned
Correct your spelling
aforementioned
show examples
points, it can be
retirared
Correct your spelling
retired
reiterated
that mental can gain more data from
materials
Use synonyms
which are
allowing
Wrong verb form
allowed
show examples
to touch it .
In
Linking Words
addition
Add a comma
addition,
show examples
online
materials
Use synonyms
have affected
on
Change preposition
apply
show examples
users.
sara.albalushi1993
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
advice
Your essay needs a more comprehensive introduction to clearly state both views and your opinion. Begin with a more general statement about the topic before stating your opinion and outlining the points you will discuss.
advice
Work on organizing your ideas clearly. Each paragraph should have a clear central idea, supported by relevant examples or explanations. Try to develop your points more thoroughly.
advice
Include more specific examples to support your points. This adds depth to your discussion and makes your argument more convincing.
advice
Work on grammar and sentence structure to improve clarity. Some sentences are awkwardly phrased and may confuse the reader. Proofread your work to avoid these issues.
positive highlight
Your essay addresses the task and both views are mentioned, which shows a good understanding of the prompt.
positive highlight
You have made an attempt to conclude your essay, which shows an understanding of essay structure.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
Paragraph 1 - Introduction
Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion
Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion
Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.
A few people believe that providing a large number of sports facilities can enhance people's fitness is the perfect option. However, I strongly believe in some people's opinion that this will not influence public health to a huge level. In addition to this, some other measures should be provided. This essay will discuss both views.
It is well known that craft is able to trigger a variety of emotions and feelings. A specific group of individuals have the idea that it could contribute to both a more meaningful life and to certain goals they want to achieve whilst others think that it is mostly fiction and is not meaningful for the world we are living in. In this essay, I will outline the reasons for both statements and finally express my opinion about this topic.
It is often believed that people feel the happiest during their youth. However, some people are sceptical about this as the happiest feeling adults experience outweighs that of young adults despite their growing responsibilities. I partially support the former view, for more diverse experiences young people have regardless of an increasing sense of satisfaction among responsible adults.
Nowadays, due to the pace of technology, it has been considered that using physical books and newspapers may be replaced by digital versions in the future. In my perspective, the lower price of these versions and their being easier to use makes the mentioned view a logical prediction.