The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they on holiday in 2010

The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they on holiday in 2010
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This
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graphic illustrates the variety of residential places in percentage preferred by the British people from England, Scotland, Wales and Northern
Ireland
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while
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on holiday in 2010.
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, hoteling was most popular among Britishers followed by self-catering
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camping and caravans were less common modes except in Northern
Ireland
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where caravans were second in preference. It is clear from the chart that in 2010, most people in the UK liked to stay in hotels with more than half of English people and almost half of the holidaymakers in Scotland and Wales preferring it.
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, these figures were less for
Ireland
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at 45 per
cent
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.
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, the numbers for self-catering were just above one-quarter for the populace from all sites except Northern
Ireland
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, where it was chosen by only 12 per
cent
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of individuals.
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, camping was not a much-preferred mode of accommodation with just under 12 per
cent
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of the masses opting for it.
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, caravan was least liked by the majority with figures below 11 per
cent
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except in Northern
Ireland
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where the numbers exceeded 30 per
cent
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