The diagram shows the the life cycle of a frog.
The diagram shows the reproduction process of
frogs
.
Overall
, there are various stages in the life of a common frog, from mature frogs
mating to produce frog spawn,
to the growth of the immature form, known as tadpoles, Remove the comma
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and
frogs
developing some time later.
At the beginning of the process, the mating of two adult frogs
takes place on the bank of a river or pond, after which frogspawn or eggs are laid in the water
by the female. This
is followed by the frogspawn developing into tiny tadpoles, at which point they gradually develop their limbs, and organs and change their body shape while
living in the water
.
The process continues with the tadpoles growing into young frogs
, which still display the tail section the
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However
, the tail is shorter than that of a tadpole. These young frogs
continue to inhabit in
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before they develop into mature ones and are able to live outside the water
. It is important to note that they lose their tails at this
stage. Finally
, the cycle begins again when two fully-grown frogs
, which are capable of reproducing, mate.Submitted by lenam2k1 on
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