You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter • Correct the information in the article • Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in connection with the article in your
magazine
which has been published in your Use synonyms
magazine
about the infrastructure of Zanjan. Use synonyms
According to
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this
article, Zanjan has a weak infrastructure. From an environmental viewpoint, a number of trees are a few and the city has just one central park. Linking Words
However
, I should point out that Linking Words
as a result
of changing local officials, Linking Words
such
as the mayor and their deputies, different measures have been taken in order to solve these problems. Linking Words
For example
, some new parks have been established and different trees have been planted in the main parts of the city. Linking Words
Therefore
, Linking Words
this
argument that was written in your Linking Words
magazine
about Zanjan is not true.
Given the fact that your Use synonyms
magazine
is an international travel Use synonyms
magazine
and it has different fruitful articles about various cities and countries. It is pretty crucial for your periodic to publish correct information. Use synonyms
Due to
the fact that Linking Words
this
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magazine
has a great impact on Use synonyms
travelers’
decisions. Most Change the spelling
travellers’
of
travelers who intend to make an itinerary for their trip, use its advice so as to make a correct decision. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, Linking Words
as a result
of false information, Linking Words
travelers’
decisions have been changed totally.
To rectify Change the spelling
travellers’
this
situation, I suggest that you choose different local reporters from each city to provide suitable news and articles for your Linking Words
magazine
.
I look forward to receiving your message.
Yours faithfully,
Mahshid KargarUse synonyms
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coherence cohesion
Include a brief overview of the inaccurate information at the beginning of the letter for clearer context.
task achievement
Proofread for minor grammatical mistakes such as repeated phrases and slight awkwardness in phrasing.
task achievement
The letter clearly addresses all parts of the task, providing corrections, explaining the importance of accuracy, and offering constructive suggestions.
coherence cohesion
Ideas are logically structured, and the letter follows a clear progression from introduction to detailed explanation to suggestions.
coherence cohesion
Paragraphs are well-organized, each focusing on a single idea, making the letter coherent and easy to read.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite