The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates how many tourists visit the Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017, The visitors
usually stay on cruise
ships
or stay on the island
.
Overall
, The number of tourists is increasingly rising. Visitors
staying on the island
took the highest proportion at the start of the period, while
visitors
staying on cruise
ships
surpassed at the end
of the period.
In the beginning, there were 1 million
people who visited the Caribbean island
, comprised of visitors
staying on cruise
ships
and visitors
staying on the island
(around 0.7 million
and about 0.3 million
respectively). In the end, the total number reached its peak at 3.5 million
in 2017, while
visitors
staying on cruise
ships
were just 2 million
and others were at 1.5 million
.
Between 2013 and 2015, visitors
staying on the islands remain stable at 1.5 million
, whereas
, those who stay on cruise
ships
sharply go up from 0.5 million
to above 1 million
. Therefore
, visitor
who Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
stay
on the Wrong verb form
stayed
island
got surpassed in the next year, while
they dropped to about 1.3 million
but others keep climb to 1.5 million
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, visitors, cruise, ships, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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