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Q: The table below gives inforamtion about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

Q: The table below gives inforamtion about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002
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The table illustrates the expenditure of
five
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countries
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 (Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey) on various products in 2002,
such
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 as
food
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, clothing and
education
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen the highest consumer spending in
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five
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the five
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countries
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 is
food
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, drinks and tobacco,
moreover
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, it is three times higher than other categories. Leisure and
education
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 get
lowest
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 revenue in
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five
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the five
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countries
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. In terms of
food
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, drinks and tobacco, Turkey spent the most at 32.14%,
while
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 Sweden spent the least at 15.77%. As for Clothing and footwear, the biggest proportion is
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Italy at 9% compared to Sweden at 5.40% which is the smallest expenditure. The third category is leisure and
education
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, the average amount in
five
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countries
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 is lower than other items.
Expecially
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Especially
, Spain only spent 1.98% on leisure and
education
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 but spent 18.80% on
food
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, drinks and tobacco. The spending
of
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in
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 Turkey is the largest percentage in the third item, which is at 4.35%.
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