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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
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The given charts illustrate the percentage of
households
 which own electrical devices and how much time is being spent doing the chores each
week
 in a specific nation from 1920
too
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to
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 2019.
Overall
 it
caan
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can
 be seen that all the devices in
households
 had an upward trend, the refrigerator and the
vaccum
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vacuum
 cleaner had the
most
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highest
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 percentage of
households
' use. It can
also
 be observed that time
was
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spent doing chores
had
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a
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declined throughout the provided period Beginning with the proportion of ownership of the electrical
equipments
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equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
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, the refrigerator increased sharply from nearly 2% of
households
 to exactly 100% of
households
 and
then
 remained until 2019. In the meantime, the
vaccum
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vacuum
 cleaner before remained at 100% of
households
 from 2000 to 2019, it began at exactly 30% of
households
 in 1920.
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Additionally
Additiionally
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Additionally
, the washing machine went up from 40% of
households
 to exactly 70% of
households
 between 1920 and 1960,
then
 fluctuated around 70% of
households
 in 40 years and
finally
 went up to approximately 75% of
households
in
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at
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 the end of the period Turning to the time spent doing housework of
households
 each
week
,
,
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apply
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 it began at 50
hours
 per
week
 in 1920,
then
 declined moderately to exactly 20
hours
 per
week
 in 1960 and decreased slightly to 15
hours
 per
week
 in 1980.
Additionally
, before
stayed
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 at roughly 10
hours
 per
week
 in 2019, it remained steady at approximately 15
hours
 per
week
 in 20 years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, week, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • time frame
  • variables
  • trends
  • significant milestones
  • turning points
  • correlation
  • reduction
  • influenced
  • societal implications
  • quality of life
  • gender roles
  • economic implications
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