The given graph illustrates how much money was spent on books in four different countries between 1995 and 2005. Some countries increased slightly, some countries grew slightly but in general, four countries also increased.
The given graph illustrates how much money was spent on books in four different
countries
between 1995 and 2005. Some countries
increased slightly, some countries
grew slightly but in general, four countries
also
increased.
Germany
started as the first one from 80 million
dollars
in 1995. Germany
raised approximately to
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million
dollars
until 1999. Then
Germany
fell slowly to just over 80 million
dollars
in 2003. And finally
, climbed gradually around
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to around
million
dollars
and Germany
started as the first,
again finished as the first in the graph. France
started from between 50 and 60 million
dollars
in 1995. Then
France
continued to increase slowly until 2001. After that, France
increased but more slowly to 2005 and France
still was second.
Italy started to grow steadily in 1997. Then
it came back to 50 million
dollars
in 1999. France
continued to climb gently until 2005 and it finished at just over 50 million
dollars
but Italy finished as the last
one. Austria had been last
one when the graph started. Change the article
the last
Then
Austria increased slightly from 30 million
to 40 million
dollars
in 1999. And it stayed stable until 2001. After that, it had
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to
just over 70 Change preposition
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million
dollars
with two dramatic skyrockets and it finished as the third.Submitted by svdnruslu on
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