The graph below shows the proposition of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The graph below shows the proposition of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
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The graph illustrates the changing of the proportion of the population aged 65 and over living in Japan, Sweden and the USA from 1940 to 2040.
Overall
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, the rate of residents aged 65 and over in three different counties will increase. Remarkably,
this
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figure in the USA was the highest at the start of the period but
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position will belong to Japan
at the end
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of the period. Starting, from 1940 to 2024, the USA has witnessed a fluctuation and growth from about 9% of the population aged 65 and over to about 18% of one and it will experience a significant rise to about 24% in 2040. Regarding Sweden, the percentage of people aged 65 and over living here stood at about 7% in 1940, and
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it has climbed to over 20% in 2024.
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figure is predicted that it will reach over 25% in 2040.
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, there was only 5% of individuals aged 65 and over in Japan in 1940.
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, it has gone up to 10% in 2024. After that, it will peak at about 28%.
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