WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent 

their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and 

make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart compares how families in one country spent their weekly income on average in 1968 and 2018. The largest percentage that families used their earnings for in 1968 was for food, which accounted for 35%,
while
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they only used about
half
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that amount around 17% in 2018. The most significant category that people spent their earnings
for
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in 2018 was
for
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leisure, which accounted for a staggering 22%,
while
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they utilised less than
half
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that proportion at only 9% in 1968. Surprisingly, the percentage for household goods remained the same at 8% for both 1968 and 2018. Other notable costs include housing which doubled from 10% in 1968 to nearly 20% in 2018. On a similar note, the costs for transport jumped from 8% in 1968 to 14% in 2018. Contrastingly, the amount spent on clothing and
footware
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footwear
reduced by
half
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from 10% in 1968 to 5% in 2018.
Likewise
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, the 8% of savings spent on personal goods in 1968 reduced to
half
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at 4% in 2018. The only category with incremental change was fuel and power which decreased slightly from 6% in 1968 to 4% in 2018.
Overall
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, it is interesting to observe the changes in quantitative data on various areas
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in that
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that
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which
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families spend their weekly income over the span of 50 years.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words half with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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