The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the
cycle's
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cycle
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life of a
bottle
of
glass
and demonstrates how is recycled. The cycle starts when the consumer
throw
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throws
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away the
bottle
in the right green bin. The bin when is
fullfilled
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fulfilled
is going to
empty
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into a truck that
go
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to the treatment plant building to deposit the used
glass
. Sequently, in
this
structure,
glass
has been washed and
than
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then
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sterilised into a
machine
. These first three steps are followed by
other
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three passages. Once
glass
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the glass
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is cleaned, the material is ready to go into
crushing
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the crushing
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machine
and
then
into
melting
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the melting
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machine
. The
followed
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following
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procedure is making moulds with the moulding
machine
, before being ready to be
distribuited
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distributed
in
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supermarkets
due to
delivery trucks. Once
in
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on
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supermarket shelves,
costumers
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customers
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can buy and use the
bottle
recycled and when the
bottle
is empty throw away
again
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apply
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the
glass
in the right bin,
thus
the process can start again.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bottle, glass, machine with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • recycled
  • stages
  • collection
  • waste glass
  • sources
  • bottles
  • jars
  • windows
  • transported
  • recycling facility
  • sorted
  • color
  • processes
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • labels
  • caps
  • crushed
  • cullet
  • raw material
  • melted
  • furnace
  • temperature
  • molded
  • new glass products
  • distribution
  • consumers
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