The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the
cycle's
life of a Change noun form
cycle
bottle
of glass
and demonstrates how is recycled.
The cycle starts when the consumer throw
away the Change the verb form
throws
bottle
in the right green bin. The bin when is fullfilled
is going to Correct your spelling
fulfilled
empty
into a truck that Wrong verb form
be emptied
go
to the treatment plant building to deposit the used Change the verb form
goes
glass
. Sequently, in this
structure, glass
has been washed and than
sterilised into a Replace the word
then
machine
.
These first three steps are followed by other
three passages. Once Correct article usage
the other
glass
is cleaned, the material is ready to go into Add an article
the glass
crushing
Correct article usage
the crushing
machine
and then
into melting
Correct article usage
the melting
machine
. The followed
procedure is making moulds with the moulding Replace the word
following
machine
, before being ready to be distribuited
Correct your spelling
distributed
in
supermarkets Change preposition
to
due to
delivery trucks.
Once in
supermarket shelves, Change preposition
on
costumers
can buy and use the Correct your spelling
customers
bottle
recycled and when the bottle
is empty throw away again
the Rephrase
apply
glass
in the right bin, thus
the process can start again.Submitted by bucciarellianna3 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bottle, glass, machine with synonyms.
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