The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn

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The given diagram illustrates the processing of

ethanol

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fuel from

corn

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Overall

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this

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is a complete process consisting of nine main steps: harvesting, storing, milling, cooking, fermenting, separating, purifying

ethanol

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, storing, and transporting.

At the first stage

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of the

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fuel-producing process,

corn

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will be harvested and

then

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stored at a suitable place to ensure the quality of the

corn

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.After storing,

corn

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will be milled into the factory to cook with water for 4 hours,

then

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it will be fermented for 2 days. After 2 days,

ethanol

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is produced and

then

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separated into liquid and solid, but solid by-products will be taken out. After the separating step,

ethanol

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will be purified for 5 hours. After 5 hours,

ethanol

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is stored and

then

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transported to the gas station by the fuel tanker or normal truck.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

134 words

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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn

The plans below show the layout of the ground floor of a museum in 1990 and in 2010

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A teacher's ability to relate well with students is more important than the ability to give knowledge.

Some people think that countries should limit the amount of food that they import and mainly eat products from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others think they should only be allowed subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?