The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the year 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie-chart shows reasons for migration in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the number of
years
that immigrants intend to stay in Great Britain between 2000 and 2008 and the pie diagram presents the proportion of five different reasons in 2008.
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Overall
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it is clear that
the vast majority of people tend to stay in the UK Linking Words
up
to 2 Change preposition
for up
years
except in the early period Use synonyms
while
several individuals are not interested in staying around 2-4 Linking Words
years
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Moreover
, in 2008, one of the most Linking Words
reasons
that they gave was for work.
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important reasons
To begin
with, both the 4+ and 0-2 staying length of immigrants Linking Words
group
started at the same level which was at 150 and levelled off at Use synonyms
this
level for one year. Linking Words
Besides
, both of them Linking Words
further
widened by the former Linking Words
group
continuously shot up to a gigantic 250 in 2004 and the latter Use synonyms
group
remained unchanged throughout the Use synonyms
last
year. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the 2-4 Linking Words
years
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group
fluctuated from a petite 50 in 2000 to 100 in 2008. What is interesting to note is that the 0-2 Use synonyms
group
was lower than the 4+ Use synonyms
group
roughly 3 times in the first year but in the end, it reduced to 1.5 times.
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On the other hand
, the fraction of work reason occupied an enormous 38% and came in first place. Study and Accompany / join family registered a massive 32% and 16% respectively. Both other and no-reason accounted for 7%. What is surprising to see is that the percentage of study was more than family two times.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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