The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates some
differrent
methods of producing noodles in a factory.
Correct your spelling
different
Overall
, there are total
of eight steps, beginning with the storage of silos and ending with the Correct article usage
a total
labeling
and sealing.
Change the spelling
labelling
To begin
with, silos has
been Correct subject-verb agreement
have
storage
in many massive containers before being delivered to the mixer. After that, water and oil are put into the mixer to blend them. Replace the word
stored
Then
this
kind of mixture is going to be put on the conveyor to the rollers. After going through that kind of machine, it is
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has
Verb problem
apply
been
dough sheeted to increase Unnecessary verb
apply
Correct pronoun usage
their
the
resilience Change the word
their
of
Change preposition
apply
them
. To finish Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
step, it has been dough striped and cut to
many little long Change preposition
into
mold
to get easily into containers
Moving toChange to a plural noun
molds
4
Correct article usage
the 4
last
steps, it can be seen that some pasta has been reshaped into discs with plenty of cups under to hold them. Next,
they have to be dried and cooked to remain
the quality of penne. Following that step, these dried noodles have been wrapped into cups with ingredients Verb problem
maintain
such
as vegetables and spices. To finish the process of manufacturing penne, those cups are labelled and sealed by labelling machines to produce fully instant tortellini.Submitted by [email protected] on
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