The table below shows the numbers of visitors to the Ashdown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart show the result of a survey asking visitors how satisfied they are with their visit during the same two periods.
The pie graphs illustrate the satisfaction of the
visitors
a year
before and a year
after the renovation and the table gives information about the number
of visitors
in both years.
Overall
, the table showed a high jump in the number
of visitors
in the year
after followed by the pie chart in
the Change preposition
of
percentage
of the
Correct article usage
apply
people
who were satisfied with their visit.
To begin
with, the results of the year
before display that a large amount
of Change the quantifier
number
people
were not satisfied with their visit before the renovation by
40% which is a dramatic Change preposition
apply
percentage
. Followed by 30% of people
who were satisfied. Furthermore
, there were three categories left which were the very satisfied by 15%, people
who were not satisfied at all by 10% and the one's
who did not respond by 5%. Looking at the Change noun form
ones
Year
after the refurbishment, the percentage
of people
who were incredibly satisfied had increased to 35% instead
of 15%. In addition
to that, the one's
were satisfied by 30% in the first Pie now it rose to 40%. We can see that the category of Change noun form
ones
the
dissatisfaction had decreased by jumping from 40 to only 15%. Meanwhile, the Correct article usage
apply
percentage
of the not satisfied at all and the people
that
did not respond were only 5%.
The table shows a huge Correct pronoun usage
who
increasing
in the Replace the word
increase
number
of visitors
in the year
after the renovation with the number
of 92,000. In the
opposite to the Change preposition
The
year
before which was 74,000.Submitted by a-la-a-11 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, year, number, percentage, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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