The table below shows the numbers of visitors to the Ashdown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart show the result of a survey asking visitors how satisfied they are with their visit during the same two periods.

The pie graphs illustrate the satisfaction of the

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a

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before and a

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after the renovation and the table gives information about the

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of

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in both years.

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, the table showed a high jump in the

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of

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in the

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after followed by the pie chart

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who were satisfied with their visit.

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with, the results of the

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before display that a large

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of

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were not satisfied with their visit before the renovation

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40% which is a dramatic

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. Followed by 30% of

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who were satisfied.

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, there were three categories left which were the very satisfied by 15%,

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who were not satisfied at all by 10% and the

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who did not respond by 5%. Looking at the

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after the refurbishment, the

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of

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who were incredibly satisfied had increased to 35%

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of 15%.

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to that, the

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were satisfied by 30% in the first Pie now it rose to 40%. We can see that the category of

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dissatisfaction had decreased by jumping from 40 to only 15%. Meanwhile, the

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of the not satisfied at all and the

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did not respond were only 5%. The table shows a huge

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in the

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of

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in the

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after the renovation with the

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of 92,000.

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opposite to the

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before which was 74,000.