The chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006

The chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006
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The given line graph illustrates the amount of money in 0.8 kilograms on four different types of
bread
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in a European country over a period of 5 years, from 2001 to 2006.
Overall
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, it can be seen that all figures experienced an upward trend except for the
Wholegrain
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bread
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.
Otherwise
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, the Brown
bread
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witnessed the fastest growth,
whereas
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the
Wholegrain
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had no change between the first and the
last
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year surveyed. In 2001,
Wholegrain
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was by far the most expensive compared to other breads, which was higher at about 0.2 euros. In the first two years of the survey,
Wholegrain
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, Brown and White saw a sharp increase of 1, 0.95, and 0.4 euros respectively, as opposed to Rye
bread
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's price, which decreased slightly. After increasing significantly, there was a plunge in
Wholegrain
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's price hit its lowest point at 0.7 euro, and slightly increased in the final year. From 2002 to 2005, Rye and White increased steadily to 0.7 and 1.3 respectively,
whereas
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Brown's price fluctuated steadily and reached a peak at 1.6 in the final year of the period.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words bread, wholegrain with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Analyze
  • Price trend
  • Period
  • Increase / Decrease in price
  • Compare
  • Starting prices
  • Shift over time
  • Causes
  • Inflation
  • Cost of wheat
  • Consumer demand
  • Price volatility
  • Types of bread
  • Market trends
  • Economic conditions
  • Euros
  • 800 grams
  • European country
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