The graph below shows the global demand for different textile fibres between 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below provides a vivid representation of the processes involved in the production of instant noodles. There are a total of 8 stages provided which will be discussed below.
First of all, the company stores the flour used for manufacturing in storage silos
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transported it to the site using trucks. Upon arrival, they are transferred to a machine called a mixer,
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combined with water and oil to be thoroughly mixed into dough
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is transported on rollers in the form of thin sheets to be cut into dough
strips in the next stage.
Furthermore
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strips are then
shaped into noodle
discs before entering a section of the machine containing boiling oil.The noodle
discs are deep-fried and dried at this
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mixed with vegetables and spices.
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