The graph below shows the global demand for different textile fibres between 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the global demand for different textile fibres between 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below provides a vivid representation of the processes involved in the production of instant noodles. There are a total of 8 stages provided which will be discussed below. First of all, the company stores the flour used for manufacturing in storage silos
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and
then
transported it to the site using trucks. Upon arrival, they are transferred to a machine called a mixer
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and
then
combined with water and oil to be thoroughly mixed into
dough
. Afterwards, the
dough
is transported on rollers in the form of thin sheets to be cut into
dough
strips in the next stage.
Furthermore
, the
dough
strips are
then
shaped into
noodle
discs before entering a section of the machine containing boiling oil.The
noodle
discs are deep-fried and dried at
this
stage.
In addition
, the fried and dried noodles are poured into
noodle
cups
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and
then
mixed with vegetables and spices.
Finally
, the
noodle
cups move to the next stage where they are sealed and labelled
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before eventually being taken to be packaged in boxes for distribution.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words dough, noodle with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • demand
  • fluctuation
  • trend
  • synthetic fibres
  • natural fibres
  • technological advancements
  • consumer preference
  • economic factors
  • environmental concerns
  • milestone
  • significant increase/decrease
  • comparative analysis
  • highlight
  • period
  • data illustrates
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