The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese
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describes the man-made process of soft cheese, which includes two major stages of physical and biological steps
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Overall
, there are 5 steps starting by combining wet ingredients and ending by filtering the cooled substance to produce the final dairy product.
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Firsly
, water and milk are mixed at room temperature, after that the liquid is chilled Correct your spelling
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2 hours at 5 degrees Celsius. Before turning to the next step, salt is added and mixed well Change preposition
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The following steps involve biological reactions which are fermentation and evaporation. The duration remains the same in the former stage Change preposition
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point of water to facilitate the latter stage, during which steam is released from the top of the container. Wastewater is emitted from the thickened/solid substance/mixture which will be cooled down at 5 degrees Correct article usage
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Finally
, the condensed output will be filtered before turning to the final product: soft cheese.
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