▪️The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000. ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates how much
money
was spent in the budget on different sections by the UAE government in 2000.
Overall
, we can clearly see that the largest amount
of money
was spent on social security at 100 billion
, While
the smallest amount
of money
was spent on transport at 9 billion
.
According to
the graph, the second considerable
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most considerable
amount
of money
is 53 billion
spending on health and personal social services,and the third is education at 38 billion
On the other hand
the internet and other expenditures cost the same amount
of money
by
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billion
, Then
defence by 22 billion
.
Also
, we can clearly see that the smallest amount
of money
goes to industry,agriculture and employment at 13 billion
, After that housing, heritage and environment at 15 billion
, and Finally
Law and order at 17 billion
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