▪️The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000. ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

▪️The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.

▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates how much
money
was spent in the budget on different sections by the UAE government in 2000.
Overall
, we can clearly see that the largest
amount
of
money
was spent on social security at 100
billion
,
While
the smallest
amount
of
money
was spent on transport at 9
billion
.
According to
the graph, the second
considerable
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amount
of
money
is 53
billion
spending on health and personal social services,and the third is education at 38
billion
On the other hand
the internet and other expenditures cost the same
amount
of
money
by
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23
billion
,
Then
defence by 22
billion
.
Also
, we can clearly see that the smallest
amount
of
money
goes to industry,agriculture and employment at 13
billion
, After that housing, heritage and environment at 15
billion
, and
Finally
Law and order at 17
billion
.
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