The table below shows the numbers of visitors to the Ashdown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart show the result of a survey asking visitors how satisfied they are with their visit during the same two periods.
The amount of viewers presented to the Ashdown museum prior to the renovation and after
that is
depicted by the graph and the pie chart compares the satisfactory levels of them.
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while
the number of attendees showed progress after the renewal,the ultimate satisfaction too depicted an increase with those changes in that place.
On one hand, a year before the structural changes,that location had 74,000 guests and a year after those adjustments the quantity was escalated by 18,000 people.
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On the other hand
, the findings of the research of the visitors who visited that institute reveal that the very satisfied proportion has increased by one-fifth Linking Words
percent
and the satisfied citizens showed a slight rise changing from 30% up to 40%. Even though the percentage of the Change the spelling
per cent
non-responcers
remains unchanged, a significant decline was there in the dissatisfied visitors. The new infrastructure has reduced the 40% of the unhappy members to 15% and Correct your spelling
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