Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case ? What can be done to attract more local people to these museums ?

There is a school of thought that

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more

tourists

pay a visit to historical

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than local people . The writer of

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is the result of

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of appeal , yet it can be solved by the promotion of media advertisements. When it comes to museums and historical sites , it is understandable that people especially

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live in that area tend to get bored with them . To explain

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, because

locals

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exposed to these locations since they were young

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it is reasonable that they have already

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accustomed to these historic relic which result in fewer

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paid

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these sites .

However

,

tourists

coming from other parts of the world will be attracted by the beauty and value of

these heritage site

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due to

its advertisements on the social media .

Therefore

, with that curiosity , they are more likely to go there rather than

locals

.

However

,

this

can be tackled by promoting the image of those historical locations and museums . To put it simply , the

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authorities

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of

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can pay

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in order to celebrate public events which can be informed on

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social media so that not only

tourists

but

also

local residents will find it worth paying

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trip to these places.

As a result

, through these ceremonies , people can have

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deeper understanding

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the value of historic

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which can encourage them to pay more visits to historical areas . In conclusion , the poor attendance of

locals

at

museum

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museums

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and historical

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attractions

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is the consequence of

lack

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a lack

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of interest .

Nevertheless

, by promoting the value of these sites , they can receive more

visist

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visits

visit

from both

locals

and

tourists