The diagram shows the lifecyle of a species of fish called salmon.
The flow chart illustrates the development of large fish called
salmon
during their life cycle.
Overall
, it is clear that
there are three stages in the process, starting with salmon
eggs in the upper river and ending with the development of adult salmon
.
The first stage occurs when salmon
lay their eggs under small stones near the reeds in slow moving
sections of the river. Add a hyphen
slow-moving
This
stage lasts for nearly half a year. In the next step, the fry, reaching 3-8 cm in length, move
to rivers with Correct subject-verb agreement
moves
fast flowing
water, where they stay and grow for around four years. In the final stage, the fry Add a hyphen
fast-flowing
grow
into smolts, and the smolts become bigger, reaching nearly 12-15 cm. Change the verb form
grows
Then
they move to the open sea to grow and become adult salmon
, reaching a length of 70-75 cm and staying there for nearly five years. Having completed all these stages, the life cycle will then
begin again.Submitted by s_syedy on
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