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Differences between countries are becoming less evident. Nowadays, people are watching the same films, fashion, brands, advertisements and TV channels. To what extent do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages.

#differences #countries #people #films #fashion #brands #advertisements #tv #channels #outweigh
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, geographical barriers among nations have
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gradually increased which encourages people to consume the same types of content on TVV and other means of media. From a personal perspective, I believe the drawbacks regarding regional culture loss far outweigh the benefits brought by
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that international greatly incentivizes mutual understanding and relationships among residents from diverse nations. To explain, by being exposed to foreign cultural products,
audience
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the audience
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 can gain insight into life and overseas countries, which many
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 a sense of empathy and compassion as
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.
This
 can be exemplified by the Japanese “spirited away”, which
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most Asia countries in 2003.
Consequently
, it was recorded a surge in foreign tourist arrivals and the number of international events which
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 place in Japan in the following years,
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contributed to the national economic growth.
However
, I would
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 that cultural globalization is more disadvantages as it perils the existence of local cultural values, especially in the developing nations. As foreign cultural products
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gain
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 increasing prevalence among the younger generations, they appeal to
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 their interest in learning about the regional history and core values, which might them from having a sense of
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 pride. Both of which deter the development of a particular nation, economically and societally. To
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 up,
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 trend might
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 advantages regarding relations.
However
, I am more inclined to the view that disadvantages will likely
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prevail
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural Homogenization
  • Erode
  • Global Heritage
  • Multinational Companies
  • Economic Disparities
  • Linguistic Diversity
  • Global Community
  • Social Cohesion
  • Dissemination of Information
  • Cultural Exchange
  • Artistic Expressions
  • Local Customs
  • Dominant Languages
  • Prevalent
  • Global Brands
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