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The table shows the distance covered in various modes of transport

The table shows the distance covered in various modes of transport
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Contained in the table provided is data pertaining to the distance covered in
diffirent
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different
 types of
transport
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 during 1985 and 2000.
Overall
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, it can be seen that car is the most popular
transport
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 in two years.
In contrast
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, the figures
of
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for
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taxi
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taxis
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 is the lowest. Beginning with
the
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personal
transport
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, the number of
car
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cars
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 were highest and increased from 3199 to 4806 between 1985 and 2000,
whereas
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 the data
of
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for
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bicycle
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bicycles
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 decreased from 51 to 41.
Additionally
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, walking during 1985 and 2000 were about 255 and 237 respectively. Moving on to
the
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public
transport
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,
majority
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the majority
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 of people
go
Wrong verb form
went
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 by local bus in 1985, but
train
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the train
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 became the most popular
transport
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during
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in
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 2000.
Otherwise
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, the taxi had the lowest number in all two years
were
Unnecessary verb
apply
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about 13 and 42 respectively

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words transport with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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