Differences between countries are becoming less evident. Nowadays people are watching the same films, brands, advertisements and TV channels. To what extent do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advanatges?
In light of the proliferation of technology, people are able to communicate worldwide, leading to cross-cultural interactions.
Therefore
, the disparities between countries are shortened, result
in a trend of watching the same TV Change the form of the verb
resulting
programs
. Although
companies can promote their products
through this
tendency, this
writer contends that it may cause ethnocide and conflicts between countries.
There is no doubt that bridging the gap between nations provide
opportunities for national brands to advertise. Specifically, by abbreviating the distance of countries, those companies can expand their marketplace easily and Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
exporting
Replace the word
export
products
globally. It is evident that retailers can recognize the current trend of customers and fulfill their demand through overall
TV programs
, therefore
, decrease
the excessive Wrong verb form
decreasing
products
to gain profit. For instance
, BBC
record has consistently shown that teenagers are more likely to gravitate toward luxury fashion brands, by comprehending Correct article usage
the BBC
this
, former companies could give suitable plans satisfy
Fix the infinitive
to satisfy
this
.
Notwithstanding the aforementioned advantage, similar
watching Add an article
a similar
trend
not only cause culture lossFix the agreement mistake
trends
,
on contrary Add the word(s)
, but
also
create arguments among residents. If viewers depend on watching foreign shows, there will be less
traditional channels and Correct quantifier usage
fewer
programs
, causing lack
of Correct article usage
a lack
interests
in national culture. Fix the agreement mistake
interest
Consequently
, ethnocide is going to happen which may lead to destruction
of a country. Add an article
the destruction
Besides
that, it is vital to understand that each nation have
different cultures causing Change the verb form
has
to
several Change preposition
apply
point
of Change to a plural noun
points
views
, Fix the agreement mistake
view
therefore
, conflicts are inevitable. Those arguments will make the friendship between states will be
Verb problem
apply
worsen
. Taking Vietnam and China as a prime example, despite Replace the word
worse
previous
Change the adjective
previously
existed
arguments, residents there are still watching and Replace the word
existing
having
the same tendency, Wrong verb form
have
as a
result
more and more conflicts occur leading to bad foreign Add the comma(s)
result,
relation
.
In conclusion, the benefit of promoting Fix the agreement mistake
relations
products
is eclipsed by the drawbacks of possible ethnocide and dissension among inhabitants. Thus
, that
TV Correct word choice
apply
programs
should not be observed worldwide.Submitted by [email protected]
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