The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of adults participating in various popular
sports
in one specific place from 1997 to 2017.
Overall
, the numbers
of people participating in Fix the agreement mistake
number
sports
have been
increased throughout the Wrong verb form
has
periods
. Despite that, there Fix the agreement mistake
period
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
dramatic
Correct article usage
a dramatic
decreased
in people playing cricket in 2017 compared to 1997 whilst, the levels of adults in swimming remained unchanged.
The major Replace the word
decrease
sports
such
as basketball, football and rugby escalated substantially from approximately, 90, 31 and 32 thousand
in 1997 to nearly around 22, 48 and 49 thousand
respectively in 2017. Meanwhile, tennis rose slightly from 50 thousand
to almost 55 thousand
in 1997 and 2017 respectively.
Besides
, swimming remained stable with just more than 30 thousand
over the period of times
. Fix the agreement mistake
time
In addition
, sports
such
as golf slightly increased within 2 decades but crickets showed dramatic
Correct article usage
a dramatic
decreased
from nearly 26 Replace the word
decrease
thousand
to just around 7 thousand
in
1997 to 2017.Change preposition
from
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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