The diagram below shows a neighborhood before and after a mall was constructed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps display the neighbourhood before and how it changed after the construction of the mall.

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, the insertion of the mall replaced the entertainment facilities and natural features.

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partially cut down the number of households. First of all, surrounding woods and

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buildings of leisures

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as a book store, and a shoe store have given way to the mall layout on Main Street, in front of the neighbourhoods.

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, near them, to make the shop more accessible for customers, the parking lot took the place of what had previously been a park with the lake.

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Main Street, where previously were located four houses before, two of them were knocked down to set the extra territory for parking to offer

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mobility

for drivers.

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, across the two remaining residences, the four remaining houses in a row on Oak Street stayed as the only unchanged feature.