The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005, and 2010 about one university. at least 150 words.
The
given
above table illustrates Verb problem
apply
percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
student
giving good ratings for different aspects of a university in 2000, 2005 and 2010. In general, most vote percentages had not changed but electronic resources Fix the agreement mistake
students
incresed
almost double.
Teaching quality had decreased Correct your spelling
increased
percent
Change preposition
by percent
2
first five years but it increased to 69 after half Change preposition
in 2
decade
. Print resources didn’t Correct article usage
a decade
changed
much. It was Change the verb form
change
percent
87 in 2005. Then
it increased percent
2 but it fell to Change preposition
by percent
percent
88 in 2010. Electronic resources was
Change the verb form
were
percent
45 in 2000. After that, it had grown
to Wrong verb form
grew
percent
72 in 2005. It increased again and
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apply
according to
in 2000 ,Change preposition
apply
climb
to almost double in 2010.
Wrong verb form
climbed
Range
of modules offered was the only topic which didn’t grow. It was Correct article usage
The range
percent
32 in 2000. It had decreased to percent
30 in 2005 Change the spelling
per cent
than
it again reduced Correct your spelling
then
Change preposition
by percent
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
3
in 2010. Buildings/ teaching facilities had never changed. It was Change preposition
by 3
percent
77 when started, it was still percent
77 both
2005 and 2010.Change preposition
in both
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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