The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005, and 2010 about one university. at least 150 words.

The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005, and 2010 about one university. at least 150 words.
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above table illustrates
percentage
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the percentage
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of
student
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students
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giving good ratings for different aspects of a university in 2000, 2005 and 2010. In general, most vote percentages had not changed but electronic resources
incresed
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increased
almost double. Teaching quality had decreased
percent
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by percent
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2
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in 2
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first five years but it increased to 69 after half
decade
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a decade
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. Print resources didn’t
changed
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much. It was
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87 in 2005.
Then
it increased
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2 but it fell to
percent
88 in 2010. Electronic resources
was
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percent
45 in 2000. After that, it
had grown
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to
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72 in 2005. It increased again
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according to
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in 2000 ,
climb
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climbed
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to almost double in 2010.
Range
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The range
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of modules offered was the only topic which didn’t grow. It was
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32 in 2000. It had decreased to
percent
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per cent
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30 in 2005
than
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then
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it again reduced
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by percent
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percent
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per cent
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3
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in 2010. Buildings/ teaching facilities had never changed. It was
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77 when started, it was still
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77
both
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2005 and 2010.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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