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The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005, and 2010 about one university. at least 150 words.

The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005, and 2010 about one university. at least 150 words.
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given
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apply
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above table illustrates
percentage
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the percentage
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 of
student
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students
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 giving good ratings for different aspects of a university in 2000, 2005 and 2010. In general, most vote percentages had not changed but electronic resources
incresed
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increased
 almost double. Teaching quality had decreased
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percent
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by percent
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2
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in 2
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first five years but it increased to 69 after half
decade
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a decade
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. Print resources didn’t
changed
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change
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 much. It was
percent
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 87 in 2005.
Then
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 it increased
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percent
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by percent
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 2 but it fell to
percent
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 88 in 2010. Electronic resources
was
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percent
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 45 in 2000. After that, it
had grown
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grew
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 to
percent
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 72 in 2005. It increased again
and
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apply
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according to
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in 2000 ,
climb
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climbed
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 to almost double in 2010.
Range
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 of modules offered was the only topic which didn’t grow. It was
percent
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 32 in 2000. It had decreased to
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percent
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per cent
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 30 in 2005
than
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then
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 it again reduced
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by percent
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percent
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per cent
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3
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by 3
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in 2010. Buildings/ teaching facilities had never changed. It was
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 77 when started, it was still
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 77
both
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in both
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 2005 and 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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