In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

We are in

this

improved world, the number of years a person

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live is now increasing and it may cause some issues for

people

and for the community. In

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essay, I will include problems and possible ways to solve them . We can see that nowadays

people

are mostly staying home with their phones in their hands which is an issue in my opinion, they are not talking to each other even when they are gathered, everyone is just sitting on their mobiles which leads to a

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silent and distance,

that is

a cause of mental issues which leads to ageing faster, the solution to

this

is more gatherings and less of using

thecnologies

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technologies

, talking to each other face to face, going to therapy, visiting families and friends

instead

of only texting. The second problem is that

people

are being lazy these days. Meanwhile, in the past

people

were always active, walking, running, and doing sports

instead

of sitting without doing anything. relying on cars to get them anywhere. They need to get their body moving by going to the gym and

also

finding hobbies to do. They need to use sun protection to prevent

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ageing.

To conclude

, we need to deal with our problems

instead

of running from them and to take care of ourselves and

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others so we can live a long happy life.