The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO,) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The graph describes the average carbon dioxide
emissions
per Use synonyms
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in four European countries: Use synonyms
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Kingdom, Correct article usage
the United
Sweden
, Italy, and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
The United Kingdom and Use synonyms
Sweden
both reduced their Use synonyms
per
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per-person
person
CO2 Use synonyms
emissions
significantly over the 40 years with Use synonyms
Sweden
showing a more dramatic reduction. In Use synonyms
United
Kingdom Correct article usage
the United
emissions
in 1967 were around 11 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
per Use synonyms
person
and in 2007, Use synonyms
emissions
dropped to approximately 9 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
per Use synonyms
person
. In Use synonyms
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Sweden
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Sweden,
emissions
peaked in the early 1970s, Use synonyms
then
reduced steeply. Italy’s Linking Words
emissions
rose steadily, especially noticeable between 1977 and 1987. By 2007, ending at roughly 7 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
per Use synonyms
person
. Portugal, starting with the lowest Use synonyms
emissions
reached about 5 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
per Use synonyms
person
.
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Overall
, the data indicates differing trends among the four countries, with the UK and Linking Words
Sweden
making substantial progress in reducing Use synonyms
emissions
, Use synonyms
while
Italy and Portugal saw increases, especially significant in the case of Portugal.Linking Words
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