The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the changes that have taken place at
the
Lynwich Correct article usage
apply
College
from 2006 to the present moment. Overall
, it is clear that
while
some parts remained unchanged including the second college
building, and
Correct word choice
apply
sports
field, cafeteria, bus stop and bike storage were added to the map
.
It is interesting to note that, in 2006, there was a path in the centre of the college
, which connected the college
buildings, and the library
. Also
to the North of the map
, there was one more road. To the Southeast of the college
, a sports
field had been opened up. To the North of the sports
field, there was a library
next to some trees. Moreover
, there was a car park on the Northeast of the map
.
Turning to the present-day map
, the library
has been replaced by a sports
centre, and it has been moved to the Southwest of the area. Also
, the main path has been expanded by two different new ways, which are connected cafeteria. Additionally
, there was a deforestration the place which is Correct article usage
the library's
library's
. A new bus stop took place near the road which is on the North of the Change the noun form
libraries
library
college
. Finally
, bike storage has been built next to the car park.Submitted by hsmkashi on
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