The table below gives information about rail transport in for countries in 2007. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features abd make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates data about trains as a means of transportation in four nations, namely Malaysia,
Canada
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China
and the UAE, in the given period of 2007. Use synonyms
Overall
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China
had the highest number of Use synonyms
people
using rail transport and passenger Use synonyms
kilometres
per individual. Use synonyms
While
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Canada
train transport was the least Use synonyms
regardring
attendees, but surprisingly the highest quantity of Correct your spelling
regarding
cargo
amongst the other countries.
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To begin
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China
had 27 million Use synonyms
people
partaking in its rail system in 2007, which was the highest regarding the number of Use synonyms
people
trains. Use synonyms
While
Malaysia had 5.9 million and the UAE had 5.5 million respectively. Linking Words
Canada
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on the other hand
, had the least amount of Linking Words
people
preferring rail transport, with just 300 thousand in 2007.
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Also
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China
had the most prominent number of passengers Use synonyms
kilometres
per individual which was 1980 Use synonyms
kilometres
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Besides
, their carried Linking Words
cargo
weighed about 23.01 billion tons. Use synonyms
Next,
the UAE and Malaysia had minor differences regarding passenger Linking Words
kilometres
and their carried Use synonyms
cargo
weight, which were 780 and 770 per head of population with 21.9 billion tons and 22.2 billion tons, respectively. Ultimately, Use synonyms
Canada
witnessed the least accounted Use synonyms
kilometers
per individual, which was only 80 Change the spelling
kilometres
kilometres
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Nevertheless
, surpassed in regardsLinking Words
carried
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to carrying
cargo
weight with 23.01 Use synonyms
billiontons
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billion tons
million tons
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